August 10, 2010

caddy got the box and set it on the floor and opened it. it was full of stars.

when i was still - they were still.
when i moved - they glinted and sparkled. i hushed.

her:  but i love that part… the box of stars… it’s such a good metaphor for caddy.

him:  yeah… bright and burning…

her:  but… she’s closed off. in this dark, claustrophobic place.

him:  …but she’s lighting up everybody around her.